At only 14 years old Zane Blackthorne is the youngest Shadowcatcher on
the force. He's also the best. He has to be. The ridiculous amount of gold he
earns hunting down tax evaders is the only thing keeping him from ending up
back in the slums where he was raised. And he'd rather eat a Narcow than end up
back there.
Zane thinks he's hit the jackpot when the Empress commissions him to
collect the shadow of a political opponent. Sure, she threatens to sic bounty
hunters on him if he fails, but that doesn't scare Zane. He's too good to fail.
At least, he thinks he is until a rat-faced urchin named Meescha gets in his
way.
A victim of the Shadowcatchers herself, Meescha shows Zane what happens
to those who can't afford to buy their shadows back. Most become husks of their
former selves, withering away with agonizing slowness; the rest die instantly,
their lives snuffed out like street lamps at dawn. Haunted by the faces of the
suffering shadowless, Zane must make a choice: continue living in luxury as the
Empress's enforcer or quit and spend what's left of his life hiding in the
slums with a target on his back.
SHADOWCATCHERS is a 43,000-word, Upper MG fantasy told from two
viewpoints: Zane's and Meescha's.
SHADOWCATCHERS
Zane slouched in the shade of a stall, casually eating a fig, while he
watched the man he was hunting move with purpose through the market. His prey
seemed anxious to keep out of the sunlight that drenched the market in heat and
light, but whether it was to keep cool or to protect his shadow, Zane didn't
know. Either way, he would have to be careful.
Dropping the fig skin onto the
ground, he double-checked the sketch in his pocket. Same fair hair and beard, same
crinkly eyes, same snaggle-toothed smile. Definitely the same man. Zane peeled
himself off the wall and slipped across the sand toward his mark. Three
scraggly chickens clucked out into his path, looking for food. Wretched birds!
Sidestepping them smoothly, he checked to see if their squawking had called
attention to him, but no one seemed to have noticed. The market was practically
a ghost town, just the way he liked it. Most Catchers worked when the market
was crowded, and the shadows long, but he preferred the precision of getting up
close.
The man strode past without even a
glance. Zane took a pinch of Silkshade powder from the pouch on his belt and
waited. When Snaggle-tooth stepped into the sunlight to buy some withered
olives, Zane slipped up behind him and dropped the powder onto the tiny patch
of shadowy ground. Deftly, Zane sneaked his foot forward, simultaneously
removing a handkerchief from his pocket. Now for the tricky part.
Carefully, oh so carefully, he
twisted his foot as the man walked away. At the same time, Zane coughed into
the handkerchief to mask the quiet ripping sound the shadow made as it
separated from the man's body. Perfect! The shadow lay whole on the ground.
Zane dropped his handkerchief on top of the shadow and crumpled them up
together. He slipped them into the pouch on his belt and turned to leave. The
powder only made shadows cloth for a few minutes. He had to get somewhere quiet
and get the shadow bottled before it wore off.
He slipped back across the square,
peeking over his shoulder to make sure the man hadn't noticed his loss. The
man's shoulders drooped as though a great weight had descended on him, and he
reached out to steady himself on the nearest wall. With any luck, Snaggle-tooth
would just think he was suffering some mild heatstroke – a bonus to hunting at
this disgustingly hot hour of the day. And if he did realize his shadow was
gone, he'd never guess Zane was the one who took it. Zane just looked like a
fourteen-year-old apprentice running errands in the market. That's why the
Lucrumcessi had decided to train him, because no one ever suspects a kid. Zane
was the youngest Shadowcatcher on the force.
He was also the best.
I am definitely intrigued about your shadowcatchers. Your third-person narration even has voice, and that is so hard to do. I'd read this!!
ReplyDeleteseamless introduction of world-building elements. fascinating concept. love how your MC is more concerned with his flawless execution that the moral dilemma of his occupation.
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